試譯 Under the Iron Sky

剛看完 Iron Sky ，覺得主題歌特別好聽，非常有末日的蒼涼感，試譯一下自己的版本。
主題歌：http://www.xiami.com/song/1770198590

##Under the Iron Sky
>Kaiti Kink*(Finland)*

Now that you have gone away
>木葉蕭下，君身遠矣，

I feel so cold, why did I stay?
>寒冰錐心，吾身何留？

Remember, I'll remember your face so pale
>君面如帛，定當銘記，

When you left me on that gloomy day.
>天靄蔽日，是時見棄。

Time goes by, memories are mine
>白駒過隙，唯留吾憶，

Still waiting for the moment I'll see you again.
>彼時可待，再與君會，

Times are changing, memories are fading
>烏飛兔走，難留吾憶，

I'm waiting for another chance
>此去經年，但等君會，

To tell you belong to me.
>千言萬語，海誓山盟。

One day
>白晝朗朗，暮夜沉沉，

I know we'll meet again
>花落燕歸，待到相見，

Under the Iron Sky.
>仰止瞻望，鋼鐵蒼穹。

*純粹是拋磚引玉，歡迎斧正。*

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上面的不太能跟著原曲唱，再來一個能唱的。

Now that you have gone away
>嘆，君身遠矣怎奈，

I feel so cold, why did I stay?
>寒冰錐心，吾身仍在？

Remember, I'll remember your face so pale
>長相憶，君面如帛，定當銘記，

When you left me on that gloomy day.
>君離靄遮日，遺吾待。

Time goes by, memories are mine
>光陰逝，追憶應猶在，

Still waiting for the moment I'll see you again.
>守相思，彼時當近臨，與君見。

Times are changing, memories are fading
>白駒過隙，難追憶，如霜退，

I'm waiting for another chance
>此去經年，但等君現，

To tell you belong to me.
>當親訴，山盟海誓。

One day
>可待，

I know we'll meet again
>磐無移，再相見，

Under the Iron Sky.
>鋼鐵蒼穹之下。   舉報